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Post by krakatoa on Feb 5, 2007 2:57:36 GMT 1
tomorrow, i will come back on this, and send you a clear resume of my book, I am at 220 pages, now, and there is a lot more to come, research part is the most time taker for the book, writing in itself, goes well. and because of my back, i can't type for more then a few hours, at a time, when the back is good. So i am happy that i was able to do this anyway.
Even fiction books need research, if we want them to look like a realy story ;D
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Post by krakatoa on Feb 5, 2007 20:39:22 GMT 1
Hi, i will try to send you a resume that you will be able to comprehend.
My book is about an attack from an alien specie, on us, to take over our planet, they came from space in big cilynders, that destroy a lot when it is falling down, on the soil. From these cylinders emerge a very big, high monumental tripod machines, these machine destroy everything, only to be able to pick up humains, and animals, They also kill humains, that are running from them, by cutting them in half with their, lazer beams, and put them in their baskets, with others humains that are not even dead, and bring them where, they do their harvest.
They also attacked us with our own, Nuclear bombs, All at the same longitude, because of the climate there, that is perfect for their read weed. So i will talk about Phoenix, and Houston, being blast off, from the prespective of peoples that survived, because of their distance from the Citys. I also mentioned HongKong, being blast off. The descriptions of what peoles lived, because of the bombs, is gruesome, and real because of the research i did on it. And of course the radiations dont arm the Aliens.
The story talks about, for some places like New-York, The first invasion is already done, Johanesburg, I talked about the first invasion, before getting after, the invasion, Hawaii and other island, no tripods there no Nuclear blast, but no more comunications, with the mainland, from anywhere, no more planes or boat coming. And it goes on......
2/3 of the populations is gone, So when the invasion is over, because the aliens dies, there is room, for a lot of suffering at first, lack of medicine(drugs) peoples are diying because of it, so imagine all of the suffering there was there. The end of the world as we know it. With time reconstruction was on the way. Life was becoming better, at the same time the scientific peoples, where searching for answers, about the machines and their occupants.
After a while, things starts to get bad, the liberty of talking about anything regarding the aliens, or the government, is not permited, it seams that they found, humain technology in the tripods, So things got worse and worse, and it will become very bad. ( i am starting that part now, for the city's that had tripods) It will get so bad, that it will end up with a fight between the government army and the resistence.
For the citys destroyed by nuclear blast, i am still on how the peoples try to survive this, the tripods a coming soon, it will get huglyer.
With time in the war between the resistence and the government army, will end, life will get better, till the second Aliens coming, with the intention of not dying this time around. Will we be ready, to win against them??? more to to follow........
Thanks for reading me, like i said i am at 220 pages, and the resistence is not even there yet, and the sensor from the government just started. So you can see there is about 1/3 of the book written. See you later, for other updates. Chantale. ;D
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Post by krakatoa on Feb 6, 2007 16:31:50 GMT 1
I already changed some of the text above, of course 220 pages versus a resume, there is important delails that i can forget to put in it, so from time to time i will add some words, and later i will keep you posted on later development in the book. See you later guys. Chantale.
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Post by Scifishocks on Feb 6, 2007 16:41:42 GMT 1
Nice Chantale. Good to see it's coming on!  |
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Post by Spirit of Man on Feb 14, 2007 6:02:40 GMT 1
I will be very interested in giving this a read, if you indeed put it up here. I am very intregued b the "Human technology in the tripods" idea, very conspiricy |
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Post by Jonatan on Feb 14, 2007 6:59:58 GMT 1
Wow, sounds great! Look foreward to reading. And... Vive la résistance humaine!  /Jonatan |
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Post by krakatoa on Feb 15, 2007 19:25:42 GMT 1
thank's guys for you comments, the only sad thing, is that the resistence will be humain agains humain, i would not be surprise if something like that happened for real, if there was a bad situation as this.
Humain technologie, can bring a lot of good things to the book, just a intch, even if they look different, the aliens, they have features especially in the face like us. That is another think, that could still go in conspiracy, anyway, or even something worst than this. This puch will happened , when it is due, at the wright time. hihi.
I want this book to be a puch, it will be violent, no choice war is war, and we will see all the sides of the war, even experiments later on, that will be done by them to us, that wont be a nice picture. But will we have our revenge?? we will see, i will give you up to date once in a While, i wont let you down. my friends.
Chantale. ;D
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Post by krakatoa on Mar 8, 2007 1:45:34 GMT 1
Hi everybody, i always said in the past that the research part of writing a book was the worst part, but i can tell you that, having to do the research, made me realise that i like it a lot now, because i learn, and see things, and learn things, about citys in the world that i had never been to, and it is quite fun to be able to know more about these city's. On internet it is really something, great, to be able to have a view 360 degree, of the city, and roads, etc.and i am sure you all know about this anyway hihi, When i write after seing all this, it become more personal as if i know what i am talking about, almost like if i visited the place. bye for now guys. Chantale.
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Post by Scifishocks on Mar 8, 2007 2:06:37 GMT 1
Research is actually fun if you look at it like that, Chantale. I didn't have to do much for my novel but I have been helping people wih other works and my next book will need a lot. I'm looking forward to it! Keep at it! |
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Post by Luperis on Mar 9, 2007 3:32:34 GMT 1
Hello, Chantale. Good to hear that you are doing well with your book, and that you are enjoying the writing and research for it. It certainly sounds like it is coming along nicely. I look forward to hearing more. |
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Post by krakatoa on Mar 17, 2007 5:12:30 GMT 1
Hi guys, today i was doing research again, but this time it was about the new world order, The resistence later will fight against the new world order and their army. I had an idea today, because of the research, that will define the futur, of the book. When we will learned, what the new world order did in the past, before the first invasion, this will change the course of everything, including the way the resistence will react to it, this will define, who they will fight against. What are the choices, i know what they are, and there is two of them. And the outcome of it will depend on the wich one the resistence choose. About the humain technology in the tripods?? i add another one that will do more question marks, than anything else, until they discover what the new world order did before the invasion. I know i might get lost in all this  , but it worth the waiting. When i feel safer i will give you another hint. bye for now. Chantale. sorry i forgot about the spell check. I am to tired.  |
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Post by krakatoa on May 25, 2007 3:40:42 GMT 1
Hi guys another resume will come soon, of course i will not call that New world order, this is ridicule, i just call this the new government.
I am at 350 pages, and still is in pretty early stage of the new government, and the resistence.
I will send another resume soon. You dont have to comment. keep it for the resume hihi. Chantale.
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Post by richardburton on May 25, 2007 9:22:35 GMT 1
Sounds like its coming along well, Chantale. Good luck with it!
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Post by krakatoa on Jun 4, 2007 4:16:54 GMT 1
Hi there thanks for the comment, i will have the resume this week, and i now no the end of the book, and it is possible that i will have a sequel.
See you later this week guys. for the following resume. Chantale.
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Post by krakatoa on Jun 23, 2007 3:28:26 GMT 1
Hi guys, sorry about not coming here often as in the past, i am organising the 50th anniversary marriage of my parents, that will be held here. There is also the library, the book, i am a moderator on a site, i know i miss a lot now i can see it by the posts here in fan creations for examples i will try to look at them sunday.
after the 14 of july i will come here more, as for the resume i was suppose to post, it will happen soon. Take care all of you my friends in WOTW SciFiShok. Chantale.
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