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Post by darkelastic on Mar 20, 2007 11:24:29 GMT 1
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Post by richardburton on Mar 20, 2007 19:31:40 GMT 1
Looks very good - well made and certainly grabs the interest. Good luck with it.
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Post by darkelastic on Mar 29, 2007 18:30:31 GMT 1
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Post by richardburton on Mar 30, 2007 15:05:16 GMT 1
Very good, as I've previously said about the trailer - camera shots and angles are good, sound quality is good, acting's not bad, titles good - it's a solid piece of short film. Well done.
One thing I would mention is that the paragraph giving a brief description of the film on the Vimeo site has loads of spelling mistakes in it which might put some people off from watching it.
"Sully owes large amounts of money he canot possibly pay. Eamma's family derserves her absolute love. One phone call wil set the cogs in motion, and fate has a way of turniong against you."
Should read...
"Sully owes large amounts of money that he cannot possibly pay. Emma's family deserve her absolute love. One phone call will set the cogs in motion, and fate has a way of turning against you."
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Post by darkelastic on Mar 30, 2007 15:22:01 GMT 1
I will sort the spelling out tonight. He must have been rushing when writing it.
What did you think of the story Richardburton?
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Post by richardburton on Mar 30, 2007 16:32:05 GMT 1
Sorry, yes, forgot to actually comment on the story itself! It's a very engaging story - held my interest throughout and made me care about the characters. That's hard to do in such a short time, but I think you managed it there - good work.
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Post by Scifishocks on Mar 30, 2007 17:24:41 GMT 1
Yeah, I'll second that. Nice work!
I did think 'A scream in the Dark' was better though.
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Post by darkelastic on Jun 20, 2007 12:09:46 GMT 1
Hi Everyone,
Just to let you know propeller will be broadcasting our film on SKY
channel 195 as part of the next 5 week schedule.
Our film will be transmitted on Saturday 23rd June at 22:01 (Premiere Night)
I hope you can watch. Thanks.
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