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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2011 19:03:49 GMT 1
This is a longer piece of Lovecraftian fanfic, sort of an apology for being away from the board for so long! I hope all of you enjoy reading it. ;D Attachments:
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Post by richardburton on Feb 22, 2011 10:51:02 GMT 1
Thumbs up from me. I really enjoyed it - you captured the essence well I thought. It does still need a little tweaking and tidying up here and there, but overall very good work.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 22, 2011 22:42:20 GMT 1
Thumbs up from me. I really enjoyed it - you captured the essence well I thought. It does still need a little tweaking and tidying up here and there, but overall very good work. Any suggestions, RB? It's still a work in progress. ;D Glad you enjoyed it! |
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Post by richardburton on Feb 23, 2011 16:07:48 GMT 1
Nothing specific - more just a general tidy up that should happen naturally as you re-draft it a couple more times to tighten it up.
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Post by Lonesome Crow on Feb 24, 2011 23:42:23 GMT 1
Not read it yet, a bit busy at the moment. It's on my, to do list.  |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 27, 2011 3:08:11 GMT 1
Not read it yet, a bit busy at the moment. It's on my, to do list. I hope you enjoy it, Lonesome! ;D |
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Post by crystalegg on Sept 4, 2011 0:43:50 GMT 1
When I read this, the first thing to come to mind was:
Boy, the way Cthulhu played
With the souls of those he ate.
Guys like us we met our fate
The End of Days
And you knew who you were then
Bottom of the new food chain
Mister you could hear the screaming
As Shoggoths yanked out folk's brains
Didn't need no welfare state
For recipients Cthulhu ate
Cultists no longer have to wait
The End of Days
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Post by richardburton on Sept 7, 2011 12:54:17 GMT 1
Like it, Crystal!
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