Post by thorgrimm on Nov 12, 2007 18:08:42 GMT 1
One of my obsessions beyond WOTW is alternate history, specifically a Rome that never fell. Well, I combined that with my love of Sci Fi to create my Space Romans. In this thread I will post my first Short Story based on that universe. So be kind in your criticisms. ;D
The Story is called Assault of the IV Ala
Centurio Decimus Flavius spit onto the sand as he walked to his Loricas. "Damn all Command officers anyway, you can take all they know about Lorica warfare and fit it in a fly's belly button and still have room for their brains".
His men were gathered expectantly around their machines as he walked up. They could tell by the look on his face the news wasn't good. No one wanted to be the first to ask but Flavius knew what the question on their mind was. "We are saddling up boys and girls, High Command needs the Ala to pull their chestnuts out of the fire again."
Flavius knew the Eques of 3rd Century wouldn't be too pleased, most had been happy here on Apulia IV. Heck he thought, most of the Denevans were kind and polite. Many had gotten used to the laid back attitude of sun, sand and beach that had been the lot of IV Ala Consular Army since it landed and crushed the defenders in a textbook planetary assault. The very perfection of that assault was probably the reason IV Ala Consular Army got tapped for this mission in the first place.
"O.K. troops, first I'm gonna tell you what High Command is telling us and then I'll tell you what I found out from a friend of mine in Communications. First: High Command wants us to pack up everything, I mean everything down to the rolls of toilet paper in the latrines because we won't be back anytime in the near future, if ever."
"Second: We are to ready all vehicles for transport to the assembly area and make sure they are completely combat ready. That means unauthorized 'sound systems' and external speakers are to be removed before loading, do you understand me Bruttius?" He said staring at number two Lorica's commander and crew.
"Third: All personnel are to make sure all their personal information is up to date before we load the transports." This last caused a stir among the troopers, since the only time that kind of order came down was when High Command thought a lot of next of kin were going to have to be informed.
"Alright, so much for High Commands load of garum, now the straight scoop." Flavius looked around to make sure no command level officers were in earshot and motioned his men to gather tight. "We are not going to be attacking the Edomites, so you can put that rumor to bed."
Flavius let them go on a bit before dropping the big shoe. "Quiet down ladies, quiet down and listen up." Flavius waited until they all tapered off and let them in on the bad news. "We have been at war with the Arachnids for five years now and things could be better for the Republic."
Flavius did not want to let things get totally out of hand so shouted them down with 'The Voice' that could be heard over the roar of Lorica guns and engines. "PIPE DOWN AND PAY ATTENTION ." The troops shut up so quick that he heard teeth click together. "I know we have had the threat of them hanging over our heads for years, but according to my cousin who is in Research and Development, our weapons and ships have finally passed theirs in capability and numbers, so High Command decided to take them out of the picture since our war with the Denevans has ended and freed up a lot of ships and troops."
"According to my friend in Communications the Classis had a rough time of it breaking into their system but they have smashed all the fleets that the Arachnids had, including their reserves, so the system is as clear as they can make it. The bad news is that Consular Group Centauri has thrown every Legionarii they had into the assault on the planet but have been unable to establish a beachead anywhere on the planet."
Eques Camillus raised his hand in the inevitable question. "Centurio, why don't they just bomb it flat like we did to the Rockhead's worlds." Referring to the silicon lifeforms the Republic had wiped out.
Flavius had wondered the same thing himself but had to at least tell them High Commands reasoning behind it. "The reason Camillus is that Command thinks that those spider-like scumbags might be hiding important information about their original intents for the Republic or about certain techs that could be important to our future so we have to take the planet intact."
The next question was from an unexpected direction. Normally if Principale Varius said three words in a day, he seemed to think he was exceeding his quota. "Centurio, any word on the losses in the Classis? My brother is aboard the Carrier Peregrine."
Flavius knew how bad it had been among the Classis but did not want his troopers too discouraged when there was work to be done. "I know that the losses were real high among the Principe and Veles class ships, but lower among the other groups so he probably has a better than average chance Varius, thats the best I can give you but I'll ask some people I know about his ship." Varius just nodded his thanks and went on listening.
Once again Camillus had to ask another question. "Centurio why aren't all the combat walkers that they kept going on and on about being used on this assault?"
This was the one question Flavius was not looking forward to answering. "Consular Group Centauri got all ten Combat walker equipped Armies that were combat ready wiped out and there are no more left that are trained up to standard for an assault this important."
Before he could continue Camillus burst out, "You mean Command lost all ten ARMIES and didn't get a toehold on the surface!?!?" Flavius just nodded and looked at the now very sober faces around him.
"Now lets get the machines checked out and ready for transport, and no one forget to update your personal data before we load out."
The Story is called Assault of the IV Ala
Centurio Decimus Flavius spit onto the sand as he walked to his Loricas. "Damn all Command officers anyway, you can take all they know about Lorica warfare and fit it in a fly's belly button and still have room for their brains".
His men were gathered expectantly around their machines as he walked up. They could tell by the look on his face the news wasn't good. No one wanted to be the first to ask but Flavius knew what the question on their mind was. "We are saddling up boys and girls, High Command needs the Ala to pull their chestnuts out of the fire again."
Flavius knew the Eques of 3rd Century wouldn't be too pleased, most had been happy here on Apulia IV. Heck he thought, most of the Denevans were kind and polite. Many had gotten used to the laid back attitude of sun, sand and beach that had been the lot of IV Ala Consular Army since it landed and crushed the defenders in a textbook planetary assault. The very perfection of that assault was probably the reason IV Ala Consular Army got tapped for this mission in the first place.
"O.K. troops, first I'm gonna tell you what High Command is telling us and then I'll tell you what I found out from a friend of mine in Communications. First: High Command wants us to pack up everything, I mean everything down to the rolls of toilet paper in the latrines because we won't be back anytime in the near future, if ever."
"Second: We are to ready all vehicles for transport to the assembly area and make sure they are completely combat ready. That means unauthorized 'sound systems' and external speakers are to be removed before loading, do you understand me Bruttius?" He said staring at number two Lorica's commander and crew.
"Third: All personnel are to make sure all their personal information is up to date before we load the transports." This last caused a stir among the troopers, since the only time that kind of order came down was when High Command thought a lot of next of kin were going to have to be informed.
"Alright, so much for High Commands load of garum, now the straight scoop." Flavius looked around to make sure no command level officers were in earshot and motioned his men to gather tight. "We are not going to be attacking the Edomites, so you can put that rumor to bed."
Flavius let them go on a bit before dropping the big shoe. "Quiet down ladies, quiet down and listen up." Flavius waited until they all tapered off and let them in on the bad news. "We have been at war with the Arachnids for five years now and things could be better for the Republic."
Flavius did not want to let things get totally out of hand so shouted them down with 'The Voice' that could be heard over the roar of Lorica guns and engines. "PIPE DOWN AND PAY ATTENTION ." The troops shut up so quick that he heard teeth click together. "I know we have had the threat of them hanging over our heads for years, but according to my cousin who is in Research and Development, our weapons and ships have finally passed theirs in capability and numbers, so High Command decided to take them out of the picture since our war with the Denevans has ended and freed up a lot of ships and troops."
"According to my friend in Communications the Classis had a rough time of it breaking into their system but they have smashed all the fleets that the Arachnids had, including their reserves, so the system is as clear as they can make it. The bad news is that Consular Group Centauri has thrown every Legionarii they had into the assault on the planet but have been unable to establish a beachead anywhere on the planet."
Eques Camillus raised his hand in the inevitable question. "Centurio, why don't they just bomb it flat like we did to the Rockhead's worlds." Referring to the silicon lifeforms the Republic had wiped out.
Flavius had wondered the same thing himself but had to at least tell them High Commands reasoning behind it. "The reason Camillus is that Command thinks that those spider-like scumbags might be hiding important information about their original intents for the Republic or about certain techs that could be important to our future so we have to take the planet intact."
The next question was from an unexpected direction. Normally if Principale Varius said three words in a day, he seemed to think he was exceeding his quota. "Centurio, any word on the losses in the Classis? My brother is aboard the Carrier Peregrine."
Flavius knew how bad it had been among the Classis but did not want his troopers too discouraged when there was work to be done. "I know that the losses were real high among the Principe and Veles class ships, but lower among the other groups so he probably has a better than average chance Varius, thats the best I can give you but I'll ask some people I know about his ship." Varius just nodded his thanks and went on listening.
Once again Camillus had to ask another question. "Centurio why aren't all the combat walkers that they kept going on and on about being used on this assault?"
This was the one question Flavius was not looking forward to answering. "Consular Group Centauri got all ten Combat walker equipped Armies that were combat ready wiped out and there are no more left that are trained up to standard for an assault this important."
Before he could continue Camillus burst out, "You mean Command lost all ten ARMIES and didn't get a toehold on the surface!?!?" Flavius just nodded and looked at the now very sober faces around him.
"Now lets get the machines checked out and ready for transport, and no one forget to update your personal data before we load out."