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Post by darkelastic on Feb 7, 2007 15:09:09 GMT 1
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Post by darkelastic on Feb 14, 2007 11:01:20 GMT 1
If anyone has the time, I would love you to give us a review on this film, help us to know what needs to be improved on and what your general thoughts were.
Thanks.
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Post by Scifishocks on Feb 14, 2007 14:34:54 GMT 1
I believe I commented on this before, DE. It's not a bad little film.  |
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Post by darkelastic on Feb 15, 2007 13:07:06 GMT 1
Yes you did in War of the Worlds online.com - I thank you. I was just wondering about others.
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Post by Wastedyuthe on Feb 25, 2007 13:23:31 GMT 1
Quite good. There was some decent editing and good score placement. However, some of the script could be better- 'I will help you, I will curse you' etc- seemed a bit too corny for example. And I didn't get the Blade Runner and Doom link- was there one? (and isn't there a copyright issue?)
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Post by darkelastic on Feb 26, 2007 14:41:27 GMT 1
We're making no money on it, so I don't think they will bother suing us. The Blade Runner and Doom sections were just homage’s, nothing more – I thought their eerie atmosphere added to the feel of the film. Yes, the script could've been better in dialogue, but you get better as you go along. The more we're doing the better the scripts are getting. That was our first film as OMG.
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Post by Wastedyuthe on Feb 26, 2007 18:01:43 GMT 1
It was a very good first effort. However, as you have now confirmed the clips of Doom and Blade Runner were nothing more than homage's, then you shouldn't have put so much emphasis on them. I felt like there was some link to what the kids were watching, to their fear-dreams, purely because of the amount of emphasis you put on what they were watching on telly. Not so much next time, perhaps.
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Post by darkelastic on Feb 27, 2007 10:30:21 GMT 1
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Post by Wastedyuthe on Feb 27, 2007 12:13:54 GMT 1
Done.
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