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Post by steann on May 24, 2007 23:55:43 GMT 1
Copy Of Report Sent To The High Commission
A scout team has been sent to a planet called Earth , we have been scrutinizing this planet for some time. As our planet is dying and will no longer sustain our people. We are desperate to save our people and has become a mission of life or death. Scout teams have explored other planets all unsuitable so far except for this planet called earth.
Other planets have been either too hot or cold , lacking in atmospheric pressure to sustain us. It is a race against time now as we fear for our children and wives. We must save our people. This planet called Earth seems to be idyllic in everyway...except for one thing the planet seems to be overrun with vermin called humans...our scientists have been examining these vermin for some months now. If we are to have any success at all in taking this planet to save our people we must eradicate these vermin. Once eradication has taken place our people can start to rebuild their lives.
©™ May 2007
to be contuined
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Post by David Faltskog on May 25, 2007 0:00:09 GMT 1
Great work Steann I Look forward to the next part. D.F.
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Post by krakatoa on May 25, 2007 3:36:28 GMT 1
Great work, keep it up. Chantale. ;D
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Post by steann on Jun 2, 2007 18:32:48 GMT 1
Copy Of Report Sent To The High Commission*
" I'm tempted to go ahead myself and start eradication on these vermin called humans. I'm frustrated to say the least the sooner " they " are gone the sooner we as a nation can rebuild. Yet i must await orders and await the rest of the fleet of fifty to join in the process. Our objective will be a place called The Naze, not too far there i have observed what the vermin call a ship* it is know as the Thunder Child ( we are unfamiliar with ships) but the more our scientists study these vermin the more we learn about them and their weaknesses. The scientists have excelled themselves in deciphering the sounds they make in using to communicate with each other. "
sub-note :ship* A vessel of considerable size for deep-water navigation. sub-note** I cannot see what purpose these vessels serve a minor team of scientists is studying these vessels and will inform us as to what use they are , if any , if they are a threat to us. If the latter is what we fear it is vital that we configure a way to eliminate these ships* immediately
©™ May 2007
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Post by David Faltskog on Jun 2, 2007 21:14:28 GMT 1
Classic read Look forward to the next part. D.F.
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Post by Anim8tr on Jun 3, 2007 23:14:44 GMT 1
Quite enjoyable! Both in terms of P.O.V. and writing style! Nice work, steann! Let's have some more!
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Post by krakatoa on Jun 5, 2007 2:53:28 GMT 1
Very nice, to see the side of the Aliens, that does not happen often, i like this a lot, very good, looking forward to see more of it, GREAT IDEA. Chantale.
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Post by krakatoa on Jun 5, 2007 2:53:56 GMT 1
Very nice, to see the side of the Aliens, that does not happen often, i like this a lot, very good, looking forward to see more of it, GREAT IDEA. Chantale.
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